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The number one: Deep Dive Script Coverage
Get In-Line & Considered Notes (up to 10 pages) starting from 99.97

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Notes directly marked on your screenplay using Adobe Reader. I scan for and mark:
- Basic Errors: Spelling, grammar, etc.
- Proper Formatting
- Consistency in personal style elements
- Consistency in plot elements
- Cuts to improve impact
- and the occasional personal emotional reaction (like, “NO!! He did NOT say that!!!!”).
I write the notes as I go so you get a feel for what your reader is thinking evey step of the way.
I write notes about your script alongside my my initial read and inline notes.
Then I take a break and sleep on it. Yes. Unlike most script coverage services, I’m not just offering immediate feedback, but also thorough and thoughtful insight.
Over the next day or so I will continue to think about your script and offer notes on a completely custom set of
Best scheduled within 2 weeks of coverage delivery
This is time for you to use how you like. Usually:
- We talk through your notes,
- Discuss possible solutions
- Bounce Ideas
- Provide clarity on anything which may have been confusing.
But I can also answer industry questions, offer insight into pursuing representation (If that’s the right move for you), and recommend which materials you might want to prepare next.

Reviews for The Original Coverage Experience

Darrell McGreggor | @darrell_writes

Coverfly Top 1% in Genre/Format
Top 100, Launch Pad Feature Competition 11th Annual
Quarterfinalist, The Academy Nicholl Fellowship 2021
I purchased the Deep Dive Script Coverage for my feature script from Kate and it was absolutely worth the price.
I was pleasantly surprised at how thorough Kate was in her notes.
In addition to a line-by-line review for formatting and word choice suggestions, she went in-depth on theme, symbolism, character relationships, and more.
Kate has a positive attitude and clearly explained what was working well in the script, but also expressed items that needed clarification or expanded scenes to avoid confusing a reader down the line.
Kate helped brainstorm solutions and we had a great follow-up conversation where I could bounce ideas off her and get real-time feedback.
Kate got me excited about my rewrite and the overall potential of my script.
I’m ready to take my writing to the next level.
Alex Kellerman | @Kellermanwritesalot

Screenwriter: Legend Of The White Dragon (2024)
Staff Writer: Dexter
Creator of @The4ckinNews
Kate's notes were FANTASTIC.
Not only were they thorough and insightful, but also unique and helpful in ways that typical script feedback is not.
The in-script notes were written during her first read-through which gave a lot of insight into how someone reading for the first time feels every step of the way...
and then the pages of more thoughtful/comprehensive notes gave a more overall insight as well as suggestions for changes to make my script better!
Matt Kance | @thatdrunkmoviedude

Assistant On The Simpsons
Kate has an awesome personality that translates well when she gives encouragement, support and constructive criticism when analyzing my scripts.
I eagerly look forward to her being my writing coach!
Thank you, Kate. Let's have some fun!
Matthew Ek | @matthewek

Chicago Playwright
Kate's notes were great!
They were constructive and supportive.
She presented them in a very conversational way that made it easy to follow up with her during the one-on-one. Which was very productive!
Both the insight to the industry and the craft was invaluable.
The entire process was a lot of fun and I highly recommend!
I left feeling more confident and like I had someone in my corner on this journey.
Ben Howard

Absolutely loved the notes and feedback Kate provided for our script.
The attention to detail really showed how much time and thought she put into it.
Her notes gave us a fresh perspective and helped trim some fat from certain scenes.
Highly recommend!
Matthew Fernandes | @fernandes_matthew

Aspiring Screenwriter
Kate is not only extremely helpful in getting the ball rolling with the process of starting and ending a draft, but engaging and attentive as well!
Justin Scott | @jscott_cc_lvx36

Aspiring Screenwriter
If I may, Kate has helped me tremendously on my first script.
I mean, I knew I had plot holes ie, She aided and showed me where I could improve.
Thus bringing my first Screenplay revision under my belt.
And onto submit to competitions and such.
I also plan on reaching out to her when I get my revision done, for another review to get my baby just right before it goes to the masses.
My sincere Gratitude to her and all of us fellow Writers as we bring forth our own words to share, to boldly go and do what thou truly want.
I bid good day & adieu to thee, here, here, mon Ami!

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This screenplay started out as a way to catalogue all of the things that I saw people do consistently that annoyed me.
To be honest with you, I started this checklist out of annoyance and then realized it was actually super helpful.
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Some of these items are basic, (may we all have the valor of a typo which has made it’s way doggedly through many an editing round and survived unscathed).
Some of these you may have never considered.
I recommend using this checklist when you think you may be ready to send your screenplay into contests or submit for coverage with yours truly.
Use it whenever you:
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This screenplay started out as a way to catalogue all of the things that I saw people do consistently that annoyed me.
To be honest with you, I started this checklist out of annoyance and then realized it was actually super helpful.
These are all of the errors I see people make on a semi-regular basis.
Some of these items are basic, (may we all have the valor of a typo which has made it’s way doggedly through many an editing round and survived unscathed).
Some of these you may have never considered.
I recommend using this checklist when you think you may be ready to send your screenplay into contests or submit for coverage with yours truly.
Use it whenever you:
- Are about to send a screenplay on to someone and want to be taken seriously.
- Are looking to submit to fellowships
- Are looking to submit to contests
- Are about to send out for notes from your friends
If you use it before purchasing my Original Coverage, It helps me dive deeper into your story and provide an even more useful round of feedback.